
Hello Poetry Lovers
Recently, I did an email poetry course with the wonderful Sue Burge on the Seven Deadly Sins.

It’s funny how these biblical things still draw us in and intrigue us. I like the ‘good’ ones of course, like lust and envy. The only one I really fell at the fence with was Pride. A difficult and intangible thing to express.
However, I attempted a half ghazal for Envy. Do read on;

Envy
What does she have that I haven’t?
Please don’t answer that

Is it a thing called talent?
Please don’t answer that

I suspect she’s wearing a wonder-bra
Please don’t answer that

Is this a sign that she’ll go far?
Please don’t answer that

Will that girl go right to the top?
Please don’t answer that

While I stay put in the cake shop?
Please don’t answer that
HM 2024
Thanks for reading, PL’s. I can’t help feeling there are worse fates than being stuck in a cake shop!! Maybe I’m the object of envy here!

Adore these pictures taken last night at Paper Tiger Poetry. Thanks to Antonio for getting these shots. A great night.
Thanks for tuning in to this occasional series, PL’s. We’ll be back with more poetry action real soon…..

You could improve the rhythm by replacing “cake shop” by “betting shop”. Of course other 2-syllable shops are available. . . . corner shop, hardware shop, music shop . . . . but a betting shop fits in with your preferred louche persona. Do keep up presenting odd verse forms. Connaire
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Thank you Connaire x
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