Acrostic September

Hello Poetry Lovers

Yes, I know September’s not here yet but I couldn’t resist referring to it. It’s such a significant month and once loaded with meaning for me.

Two acrostics on here today. A lovely descriptive piece from talented poet Trisha Broomfield, and then a coarser one from me follows. Do read on

Slowly sinks the setting sun

Embers of our summer burn

Petals fold, their work is done

Tremulous the green leaves turn

Evenings draw in cool and damp

Moon is full, a harvest glow

Burnished golds an autumn lamp

Each constellation hanging low

Reasons only nature knows.

© TB

What a beautiful descriptive piece. Beautifully written, Trisha.

I’m now going to lower the tone completely with my own take on that once dreaded month

September betrays me again (bore!)

Ending long summer holidays (sob!)

Pupil status once more             (groan!)

Tedious early to bed nights      (humiliating!)

Except for The Avengers            (on Fridays)

Meanwhile I manoeuvre a school desk (tedium)

Before the good ones are taken (shove off!)

Endless shouty teachers and text books  (Shut it!)

Ridiculing the swots (hang on!  That’s Me!)

H.M 2024

As you can see, PL’s, Trisha’s piece is much more subtle and thoughtful than my own sledgehammered and self-indulgent poem.

Thank you so much for that lovely piece, Trisha. Very visual and reflective.

Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. We’ll be back with more poetry adventures real soon….

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