





Hello Poetry Lovers
I thought we’d start the week with a bit of fun. Now I don’t know what possessed me, but I wrote a villanelle about cigarettes. Almost a taboo subject now but so irresistible.
I usually find villanelles very hard but this one took me 10 minutes to write while I was having my morning coffee, so it just goes to show you.
Anyway, it’s just a bit of a laugh so do read on;
Fags Villanelle

Please give me back my fags
You’re a scrubber and a thief
Rifling through our handbags

You really should be wearing tags
Or turning over a new leaf
And please give me back my fags

From the sweet shop you nick mags
From Tesco, joints of beef
You’re just like the other slags

So please go and nick more swag
To be honest, it will be a relief
When you give me back my fags

Remember it was Rothmans fags
Don’t hide behind that sheath
And get some more carrier bags

You didn’t do it? Good grief!
It was your boyfriend Keith
But you were still behind the blags
So please give me back my fags

H Moulson 2021
Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. Any villanelles, or other forms of poetry, do send in. Have a good week

What a toe-rag! (Excuse me …)
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There were all types up that disco! Thanks for visiting `H
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Very enjoyable for its simple yet alluring structure, with the Heather stamp!
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Thank you, Ray. I used to know some right bad ‘uns x
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I love this, Heather.
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Thank you, my sweet x
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