Hello Poetry Lovers






So, the Poetry Detective comes up with yet another intriguing poetry form – the Tritina.
It’s a mini sestina and half the size. Three lines and three stanzas and a last line, as opposed to the hefty six stanzas of the Sestina. My heart sinks when a sestina is read out, they’re so weighty.
However, the little sister, Tritina is much more fun. I’ve written one about my Mother’s fridge. It’s given me the creeps somewhat, I suppose it reminded me of being in her kitchen just after she died (don’t go there!).
Do read on……..
Tritina

Inside my mother’s fridge was beetroot
On a cracked and stained old plate
The door was buttermilked with age

The discoloured door showed its age
And the pungency of the beetroot
stained scarlet the once young plate

once a shiny and engraved plate
Before the brutality of beetroot
menacingly darkened it with age

The beetroot on a plate that hankered for a certain age.

H Moulson 2022
I hope you liked that one, PL’s. Now is that creepy, or is it just me? Who knows?! Anyway, do try a Tritina, there’s much more room to move in those rather than its big sister.




Thank you for tuning in, Poetry Lovers. We’ll be back with more related antics soon…..
Not creepy at all – in fact quite colourful- and an interesting form 🤩🌹
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Ah thank you. It’s interesting what connotations you can get from certain words and things x
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I’ll have a go at this!
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Yes, do. It’s fun – sort of x
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