Come In…..

Hello, Poetry Lovers everywhere. Once again, we have a stunning offering from the web’s Poet Laureate Mary Carr.

Mary has been through some turbulent times, but still her work with the homeless has been bottomless. Good on you, Mary.

Come In

Come on in

take the weight off

your feet

may the light shine

through the door

may peace

joy

contentment

fill these walls

long after my absence

I hear laughter

see joy

come on in

a home

smells

cooking

warmth

fire in the hearth

These walls are

filled with love and

chatter

kindness

a home

come on in

have a cup of tea

a chat

the nights are

Long

Mary Carr

Interview!!

Welcome to our long awaited interview with the lovely Christine Eales, a strong and passionate lover of haiku and talented poet. (Rapturous applause)

Now, I’ve given the poor woman a barrage of questions, and each one, Christine has answered brilliantly. Now sit back and enjoy the ride!!

(A ripple of anticipation from the audience)

Take a seat, Christine, and welcome to the show. I trust you had a good journey here…

“Well, the jetpack started to sputter a bit over the A4…..”.

Okay, small talk over. Now, how did your passion for haiku begin?

Well, this all came in about an unusual way. I entered a competition for a poem about Spring. Then, in the middle of the third verse I said “I am going to write a haiku.” I wrote one, then three more to finish the poem. I didn’t win but doing that zany thing in the middle of a poem made me look at haiku.

Here are some great places to read modern English haiku free online:

http://www.theheronsnest.com Regarded by some as the top haiku journal in the English speaking world.

femkumag.wixsite.com/home Brilliant poems written by women

http://www.waleshaikujournal.com/submit Great poems and a feature section that only take a few minutes to read.

What aspect of haiku has influenced you the most?

Once you have started to get involved in haiku, it really changes the way you look at everything. Some people would say a Zen way of looking at life evolves. Haiku captures a moment. Sometimes in the real world, and especially the natural world.

butterflies in the wind pushing against time

or the natural and the human world together:

sunny day

little boy shaking wishes

from a dandelion

Writing haiku, you do not talk about the abstract. You give facts and let the listener or reader respond with all they know about life. So you don’t mention words like love or explain your feelings.

not far away

Mum still walking

in the bluebell woods

So exploring and writing haiku means there is always an antenna working to see if something you are observing at a particular ‘moment’ is just right for a haiku. Also when you read normal poetry when a poet goes on and on about their feelings, you think they are bonkers. Another shock when you go back to normal poetry is the use of rhyme which is not used very often in the English-speaking haiku world.

Writing haiku makes you conscious of the importance of every word. We know this is true of all writing but with the tiny amount of space you have in a haiku each word has to be a nugget of gold. Even adding or taking away, ‘a’ or ‘the’ can be crucial.

the ladybird           ladybird
joining up               joining up
dots                       the dots

That’s fascinating, Christine, but how difficult is it to write haiku?

Haiku is brilliant for everyone to write as it uses facts to get the ideas of the haiku across. You don’t need an imagination, just become the observer of the small or large things in life. That you see, hear, smell, touch or taste.

There is this BIG RULE that most of us know before we get into haiku. Haiku are made up of seventeen syllables. Five on the first line, seven on the second, and five on the last line. The famous 5.7.5 layout. This works in Japanese as it is made up of very short sounds. If you say one short sound unit or ‘on’ can be replaced by a syllable, some of which can be very long, and you lose the beautiful lightness of a Japanese haiku. So to get towards that lightness, many English haiku written now are around eleven syllables. Sometimes less, sometimes more, if that’s what the haiku needs.

If you feel very passionate about the 5, 7, 5 syllables then you can do them. They are still a respected form and appear in all the top journals.

So, tell us the rules

A few vital rules are:

You must have the juxtaposition of two images (not necessarily sense of sight, any of the senses or one part of the haiku can be a thought)

massage                      scales
with amber and 
patchouli                     weighing each day 
boiling sprouts              I belong to you 

The haiku consists of two parts, the phrase where two lines are saying something and the fragment in one line saying something. They can be in any order, phrase then fragment or fragment or phrase.

shaft of sunlight                  we eat our meal
dog on the bed                     in silence
shifts                                   bellowing moon 

You must write facts so no verbose phrases about how you feel.

a daisy chain            rainy day
around her neck       blending my thoughts
her hands                 with the sherry
her feet 

Writing facts makes writing haiku accessible to everyone. You do not have to have a flowery mind. Put down those facts and shock people, make them laugh and cry.

There are lots more rules so picking them up bit by bit is maybe a good idea. And just to add to the fun, sometimes rules can be broken.

(Spontaneous applause from an awed audience)

That’s fascinating, Christine, your passion is to be envied, and I, for one, want to get writing Haiku.

Now, share your favourite haiku with us.

My favourite haiku are the one that blend the natural world and the human world:

sunrise

through a dragonfly’s wing

morning coffee

twilight

a sheepdog calls

his master home

Wasn’t that just stunning?!

(Huge applause)

Now, before we relocate to the Discotheque, I believe you have some useful websites to share with us.

www.thehaikufoundation.org/ find poems, essays, opportunities to put your poems on the blog

http://www.graceguts.com Go to article ‘Becoming a Haiku Poet’ by Michael Dylan Welch under essays.

Please join the Haiku World.

(Huge applause)

Christine Eales, thank you so much.

(Cheering etc)

Acrostic Corner..

This week, I discovered acrostic poetry. Quelle fun!

Now, this is my first attempt, so er- be gentle…..

Dobby

Darling, come in from the rain

            you lovely ball of fur

One look at me with your penetrating

            green eyes and I’m

Bowled over, just putty in your

            velvet paws

But if you sabotage my dolls house again

            And act like King Kong

You are out on your ear!

            (you little cow!)

I think I have to work on this art form. If anyone has some good acrostic pieces, please send them in via the contact page.

And to conclude, this is a picture of me performing at The Cranleigh Arts Festival last year – March 2019. In this significant time in history, I need to remind myself how much I took for granted.

I long to wear that necklace again…..

Something in the Basket!

Good morning, Poetry lovers. No sign of Dobby, but there is something wonderful in the Poetry Basket!

Yes! The wonderful Susan Evan’s debut collection Shift Happens will be reviewed over on our Poetry Basket Page.

To bag(!) a signed author copy, follow this link http://susanevanspoet.bigcartel.com

You can follow Susan Evan’s work on Facebook and Instagram @SusanEvansPoet

Now turn over to the Poetry Basket page for a delight!!

The Poetry Door….

Let’s see what’s behind the Poetry Door today….

It’s a lovely poem by Mary Carr. A great friend of mine, poetry has come to her recently. Mary has produced beautiful work, and is happy to share this poem with you:

I will…

I WILL RIDE THE WAVES

I WILL FIGHT THE TURBULENCE

TILL I COME OUT THE OTHER SIDE

AND SEE THE LIGHT AGAIN

AND ALL IT’S GLORY AND LIVE

ANOTHER DAY OF HOPE AND

JOY

Mary Carr 2019

Watch This Space…..

Dobby!!! What are you doing there?! Where’s the poetry basket?

What’s that, Dobby? A new and exciting collection is about to go in it? Very soon?

And meanwhile, here’s a comic strip?

Yes, we have another review coming soon, so watch this space and no flipping!

Meanwhile…..

Our Hero is complaining….
Bookjacket is hopeful

But it’s not easy…….

Bookjacket comes through……

Is there a moral in this tale? The talent was there all along? Who really knows?

See you soon with the Poetry Basket Review……

Something in the Basket today…..

Dobby is looking everywhere for the Poetry Basket. However, it will be a fruitless search, as I have the basket right here. And what’s more, it has something new and wonderful inside it.

Turn over to the Poetry Basket Review page, where we review Sharron Green’s lovely collection ‘Introducing Rhymes_n_Roses’

A stunning and personal pamphlet.

Now flip over to the other channel, while I tell Dobby to call off the search –