I’ve come across another interesting poetry form this week – Eye Rhymes.
Clever poet Tony Josolyne, a popular regular at Poetry Performance, has come up with some corkers!
Forgive me, Tony but I don’t possess a photo of you, so I’ve drawn a picture. An artist’s impression, I hope that’s okay – it’ll probably go for a fortune at Sotheby’s in the near future. Or turn up at the Tate, you never know!
Anyway, thank you so much, Tony for letting me share these to the world;
Eye Rhymes
Conjuring at the age of eight
His youthful hands were sleight.
Modern women who can sew
Are now becoming very few.
I fear this to be an omen
For the skills of future women.
Your savings will soon grow
From the sums that we endow.
Aren’t these wonderful? So simple and yet not. You’ve probably surmised for yourself but they have to be words spelt the same but would not rhyme such as slaughter and laughter.
Great fun but not as easy as you think. I’ve had a feeble attempt, read on;
Eye Rhymes
I walked the lonely road to Slough
I couldn’t get there fast enough!
I watched as she put on the crown
Wishing I could have one of my own.
I told my child until he was grown
That in the river you could drown.
I’m really not messing about when I say feeble, PL’s, but I enjoyed having a go. Would you like to have a go, if so, do send them in. Great poetry form. Thanks once again, Tony
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I had the best time last night at Celine’s Salon Anthology Launch So proud to be a part of this wonderful collection
Held at El Camion/The Pink Chihuahua in Brewer Street in the heart of Soho, we went down to this groovy basement. I really felt a big part of old Soho, with its alcoves and cubby holes. The sensation of being in a secret underground full of exciting things.
The biggest joy was seeing my wonderful pals read and perform
Amongst others, talented and prolific poet, Barney Ashton Bullock read from his magical book ‘Bucolicism’ and the Lucy’s (Lyrical and Gaster) were in great form as they played together once again. So lovely to re-embrace these people after the cold hand of lockdown.
My readings and voice still need work but this lovely happening has set me on the right road…
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Now, here’s an interesting form of poetry. I discovered this on an Instagram thread by the inventive Soul Craft Poetry.
The Cherita, a Malay word for telling a story, or tale, consists of six stanzas; one single line, two lines then three.
There are two examples below, the first is extraordinarily unsubtle, penned by a ruthless poet, followed by a tender and gentle one by the lovely Trisha Broomfield.
Read on;
Soul Crafting
Don’t you tell me that!
I can read you like a book, and see your soul crafting through you.
Do you think I was born yesterday? Come and finish ironing your shirts! Your ties and shoes are in a sorry state too!
And now…..
Cherita
I stretch my hand towards the fire
it is my only source of light
my soul crafts out for you tonight
I hear the creaking of the gate
an owl calls out, the hour is late
an answer swiftly from its mate.
08/10/2021Trisha Broomfield
Wasn’t that last one lovely?! Thank you so much, Trisha for rising to that challenge and sharing such a beautiful piece.
The Cherita is a fun form, do try it at home. I’d welcome any submissions.
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I thought we’d start the week with a bit of fun. Now I don’t know what possessed me, but I wrote a villanelle about cigarettes. Almost a taboo subject now but so irresistible.
I usually find villanelles very hard but this one took me 10 minutes to write while I was having my morning coffee, so it just goes to show you.
Anyway, it’s just a bit of a laugh so do read on;
Fags Villanelle
Please give me back my fags
You’re a scrubber and a thief
Rifling through our handbags
You really should be wearing tags
Or turning over a new leaf
And please give me back my fags
From the sweet shop you nick mags
From Tesco, joints of beef
You’re just like the other slags
So please go and nick more swag
To be honest, it will be a relief
When you give me back my fags
Remember it was Rothmans fags
Don’t hide behind that sheath
And get some more carrier bags
You didn’t do it? Good grief!
It was your boyfriend Keith
But you were still behind the blags
So please give me back my fags
H Moulson 2021
Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. Any villanelles, or other forms of poetry, do send in. Have a good week
To my delight, the lovely poet Trisha Broomfield has accepted my paradelle challenge and has come up with a corker.
To be honest, I think it’s better than its source of inspiration. A lovely poignant and clever piece, thank you so much Trisha. Truly talented. Do read on;
Paradelle
You’ve left me and I’m all alone
You’ve left me and I’m all alone
Your cheating heart now turned to stone
Your cheating heart now turned to stone
You’ve left me and I’m turned to stone
Your cheating heart now all alone
My life moves on while you hang back
My life moves on while you hang back
It emphasises all you lack
It emphasises all you lack
My life emphasises all you lack
It moves on while you hang back
I hope you will find contentment soon
I hope you will find contentment soon
Your emotions tugged by the full moon
Your emotions tugged by the full moon
I hope your emotions will find contentment soon,
You, tugged by the full moon.
You’ve left me; I’m tugged by the full moon
and my life moves on, while you hang back
your cheating , heart, it emphasises all you lack
now you, all alone, turned to stone
I hope your emotions will find
contentment soon.
09/09/2021Trisha Broomfield
Wasn’t that a beautiful piece of writing?! Really well done, Trisha. Please keep them coming.
A paradelle, PL’s, is a very hard poetry form and I’m still at the coalface with mine. If you think you can take on a paradelle, please send it in…
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Discovering American poet Billy Collins, in a second-hand poetry book sale, I was drawn in by his honest style. Not to mention the paradelle form that he used for the following poem.
Has anyone tried this?! What a swine to do! Basically, there are 4 stanzas with the last two lines having to use their above words precisely, then the fourth stanza has to use all the words of the poem.
Confused? – you will be. Read on…
Paradelle for Susan
I remember the quick, nervous bird of your love.
I remember the quick, nervous bird of your love.
Always perched on the thinnest, highest branch.
Always perched on the thinnest, highest branch.
Thinnest love, remember the quick branch.
Always nervous, I perched on your highest bird the.
It is time for me to cross the mountain.
It is time for me to cross the mountain.
And find another shore to darken with my pain.
And find another shore to darken with my pain.
Another pain for me to darken the mountain.
And find the time, cross my shore, to with it is to.
The weather warm, the handwriting familiar.
The weather warm, the handwriting familiar.
Your letter flies from my hand into the waters below.
Your letter flies from my hand into the waters below.
The familiar waters below my warm hand.
Into handwriting your weather flies you letter the from the.
I always cross the highest letter, the thinnest bird.
Below the waters of my warm familiar pain,
Another hand to remember your handwriting.
The weather perched for me on the shore.
Quick, your nervous branch flew from love.
Darken the mountain, time and find was my into it was
with to to.
Billy Collins
Wonderful, but difficult, although I know a certain talented poet has come up with (a frankly better) one. I’m still at the coalface, and I don’t like to admit defeat.
Okay, PL’s, I challenge you to come up with one of these. In fact, I demand it.
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Well, the weather may be balmy but I’m certainly turning out my drawers and sorting out my winter clothes. Isn’t it lovely when seasons turn?
September to many of us is like a new start. That’s why I was inspired by Sharron Green’s beautiful poem below. It says so much about the nature that surrounds us and how we should appreciate it.
Thank you for this, Sharron, a real corker Do read on;
A Taste for all Seasons
Spring sends us all a-spin with a fresh spurt. From slumberland, new life aspires to grow. Slim saplings through the frost with danger flirt, and tulips pop up trumpeting ‘Hello!’
Summer’s slick swallows swiftly swoop and soar. Seeds sown, now grown, sway softly in the breeze. Butterflies bid blue buddleia ‘Bonjour!’ Chic sunflowers seize kisses from the bees.
Autumn blazes forth to wild ovations. Its incandescent energy ignites. Each leaf’s decease draws soulful incantations. Flamboyant flair incites a raw delight.
Winter cloaks the sky in clotted clouds. It’s crystals form a fragile filigree. The Earth is enveloped in icy shrouds. While nature rests, this perfect pause is key.
If you want every day to be win win Be fully in the season you are in.
@rhymes_n_roses 2021
Wasn’t that such a beautiful piece? Such detail that defined the seasons we live through Thank you, Sharron, and keep them coming ….
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before I set sail on holiday, I really wanted to post this touching poem from clever poet, Trisha Broomfield
A strong and poignant recollection of a childhood home. I remember longing to live in the country, and after reading this, I realise I still do.
I also had the pleasure of Trisha face to face last week at the Roger McGough Finalists Competition. Hence the lovely selfie above. What a day that was….
Read on;
Milestones a Cotswold Home
Four cottages knocked into one
the ghost inhabited number two
only mum could see, moving to one side
to let it pass each time they met
in the doorway to the dining room
the hall was twenty-two yards long
mum said, as long as the cricket pitch
but we were too young to care
as long as we had our own rooms
one each with a window seat
horses clip clopped down the road
the farmer next door kept pigs
and mud, school was an uphill struggle
and a huddle around a round fire,
Royal Scots washed down with warm school milk
we watched, under duress, Yuri Gagarin
his flight a milestone in the race to space
while swinging our legs, bored.
Then out to play, so much room to run
so little chance of reaching a beach.
Trisha Broomfield 2021
Wasn’t that a beautiful piece? Real images of childhood and intricate detail. Thank you so much, Trisha. Please keep them coming.
Going on a boat this week. I’ll keep you posted Thanks for tuning in …….