Welcome back to one of my favourite art forms, the triolet poem.
Now, the first is by an up-and-coming poet who has not kept to the rules, in fact she has downright cheated and laughed in their faces. She claims the last line simply works better like that, and who are we to tell her what to do, we’re not the boss of her etc etc…
Now the second triolet is beautifully done by an even more up-and-coming poet Trisha Broomfield, who had the good grace to stick to the rules
Read on;
Auntie Florrie
Auntie Florrie, you would eff and blind
And you only watched ITV
Under heavy make-up, you were lined
Auntie Florrie, you would eff and blind
People had to take you as they find
Never watching that snotty BBC
Auntie Florrie, you would eff and blind
You were so beautiful to me
Now for Trisha’s classier one;
Chair Triolet
I sit in my writing chair and swivel
I thought that it would help me write, this chair
but I’m turning out a load of drivel
I sit in my writing chair and swivel
my mood is really quite uncivil
I think up plots and flick my hair
I sit in my writing chair and swivel
I thought that it would help me write, this chair.
03/11/2021Trisha Broomfield
Wasn’t that just great?! Triolets are really such fun and I dare you to send one in. Trisha’s penned some more corkers and has kindly given me permission to show them in part II
Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. More poetry capers soon….
We’re on my favourite theme of the one minute poem, and lovely poet Trisha Broomfield has penned a very seasonal and relevant one indeed.
Thank you so much for this, Trisha.
This lovely poetry form can be quite addictive, and fun. Let me remind you again of the rules; 60 syllables, 3 stanzas and the first line has to have 8 syllables. Then it’s AABB
Halloween and the clocks go back,
Evenings are black Snuggle each night Turn on the light
Let’s eat baked spuds and pumpkin pie, Prepare the Guy It’s fireworks soon Up to the moon
Best sausages and hot baked spuds, Snowdrops are buds Daffodils too Hiding in dew
Before too long the sound of spring First, Carol sing Release the old Safe from the cold.
Wasn’t that beautiful?! Thank you so much, Trisha. Wonderful words, and I want to see more.
Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. We’ll be back with more poetry japes real soon…
I’ve come across another interesting poetry form this week – Eye Rhymes.
Clever poet Tony Josolyne, a popular regular at Poetry Performance, has come up with some corkers!
Forgive me, Tony but I don’t possess a photo of you, so I’ve drawn a picture. An artist’s impression, I hope that’s okay – it’ll probably go for a fortune at Sotheby’s in the near future. Or turn up at the Tate, you never know!
Anyway, thank you so much, Tony for letting me share these to the world;
Eye Rhymes
Conjuring at the age of eight
His youthful hands were sleight.
Modern women who can sew
Are now becoming very few.
I fear this to be an omen
For the skills of future women.
Your savings will soon grow
From the sums that we endow.
Aren’t these wonderful? So simple and yet not. You’ve probably surmised for yourself but they have to be words spelt the same but would not rhyme such as slaughter and laughter.
Great fun but not as easy as you think. I’ve had a feeble attempt, read on;
Eye Rhymes
I walked the lonely road to Slough
I couldn’t get there fast enough!
I watched as she put on the crown
Wishing I could have one of my own.
I told my child until he was grown
That in the river you could drown.
I’m really not messing about when I say feeble, PL’s, but I enjoyed having a go. Would you like to have a go, if so, do send them in. Great poetry form. Thanks once again, Tony
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I had the best time last night at Celine’s Salon Anthology Launch So proud to be a part of this wonderful collection
Held at El Camion/The Pink Chihuahua in Brewer Street in the heart of Soho, we went down to this groovy basement. I really felt a big part of old Soho, with its alcoves and cubby holes. The sensation of being in a secret underground full of exciting things.
The biggest joy was seeing my wonderful pals read and perform
Amongst others, talented and prolific poet, Barney Ashton Bullock read from his magical book ‘Bucolicism’ and the Lucy’s (Lyrical and Gaster) were in great form as they played together once again. So lovely to re-embrace these people after the cold hand of lockdown.
My readings and voice still need work but this lovely happening has set me on the right road…
Thanks for tuning in, Poetry Lovers. Keep your hand on that dial for more poetry antics real soon….
Now, here’s an interesting form of poetry. I discovered this on an Instagram thread by the inventive Soul Craft Poetry.
The Cherita, a Malay word for telling a story, or tale, consists of six stanzas; one single line, two lines then three.
There are two examples below, the first is extraordinarily unsubtle, penned by a ruthless poet, followed by a tender and gentle one by the lovely Trisha Broomfield.
Read on;
Soul Crafting
Don’t you tell me that!
I can read you like a book, and see your soul crafting through you.
Do you think I was born yesterday? Come and finish ironing your shirts! Your ties and shoes are in a sorry state too!
And now…..
Cherita
I stretch my hand towards the fire
it is my only source of light
my soul crafts out for you tonight
I hear the creaking of the gate
an owl calls out, the hour is late
an answer swiftly from its mate.
08/10/2021Trisha Broomfield
Wasn’t that last one lovely?! Thank you so much, Trisha for rising to that challenge and sharing such a beautiful piece.
The Cherita is a fun form, do try it at home. I’d welcome any submissions.
Thank you for tuning in, PL’s. Back with more poetry japes real soon….
I thought we’d start the week with a bit of fun. Now I don’t know what possessed me, but I wrote a villanelle about cigarettes. Almost a taboo subject now but so irresistible.
I usually find villanelles very hard but this one took me 10 minutes to write while I was having my morning coffee, so it just goes to show you.
Anyway, it’s just a bit of a laugh so do read on;
Fags Villanelle
Please give me back my fags
You’re a scrubber and a thief
Rifling through our handbags
You really should be wearing tags
Or turning over a new leaf
And please give me back my fags
From the sweet shop you nick mags
From Tesco, joints of beef
You’re just like the other slags
So please go and nick more swag
To be honest, it will be a relief
When you give me back my fags
Remember it was Rothmans fags
Don’t hide behind that sheath
And get some more carrier bags
You didn’t do it? Good grief!
It was your boyfriend Keith
But you were still behind the blags
So please give me back my fags
H Moulson 2021
Thanks for tuning in, PL’s. Any villanelles, or other forms of poetry, do send in. Have a good week
To my delight, the lovely poet Trisha Broomfield has accepted my paradelle challenge and has come up with a corker.
To be honest, I think it’s better than its source of inspiration. A lovely poignant and clever piece, thank you so much Trisha. Truly talented. Do read on;
Paradelle
You’ve left me and I’m all alone
You’ve left me and I’m all alone
Your cheating heart now turned to stone
Your cheating heart now turned to stone
You’ve left me and I’m turned to stone
Your cheating heart now all alone
My life moves on while you hang back
My life moves on while you hang back
It emphasises all you lack
It emphasises all you lack
My life emphasises all you lack
It moves on while you hang back
I hope you will find contentment soon
I hope you will find contentment soon
Your emotions tugged by the full moon
Your emotions tugged by the full moon
I hope your emotions will find contentment soon,
You, tugged by the full moon.
You’ve left me; I’m tugged by the full moon
and my life moves on, while you hang back
your cheating , heart, it emphasises all you lack
now you, all alone, turned to stone
I hope your emotions will find
contentment soon.
09/09/2021Trisha Broomfield
Wasn’t that a beautiful piece of writing?! Really well done, Trisha. Please keep them coming.
A paradelle, PL’s, is a very hard poetry form and I’m still at the coalface with mine. If you think you can take on a paradelle, please send it in…
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